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February 3rd 2012, 12:48 AM
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Finger tips running down lines of scars
If I could I'd change them into stars I'd fill the sky with my twisted, painful stories Let them shine bright. Behold my glory. You can't wipe away the pain with a sorry The memories stuck in your brain like inventory Just stacking up till it all falls down Making your stomach feel like its hit the ground Each burden in your head weighs a thousand pounds Suddenly all the pain is a massive mound Maybe you feel like your starting to drown Your life is all unwound And your just hoping to hear something profound But everyone's put you in the background And no one hears you cry or even make a sound They're all bound to their own self destruction There is no real instructions telling you how to deal with the pain, How to release yourself from the chains, Or how to dance in the rain It's knowledge you gain And if you don't you'll go insane I learned to release from my veins It helped drain my emotions, its hard to explain. But the pleasure gets harder and harder to attain And these feelings are unbearable to contain Maybe I can cover them with champagne But..Is slicing myself open with a razor really humane? How many more shirts must I throw away cause of bloodstains.. Finger tips running down lines of scars If I could I'd change them into stars I'd fill the sky with my twisted, painful stories Let them shine bright. Behold my glory. I might add a few more verses and change it around a bit..but so far this is what I got. Let me know what you think <33 Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind. "Live your life and risk it alltake your time, no need to hurry have some fun, and never worry ♥" |
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February 3rd 2012, 12:52 AM
I love it a lot. Great job. I like the flow of it!
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February 3rd 2012, 01:06 AM
I really love how this sounds, and how you repeated the first and last part of it.
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February 3rd 2012, 02:57 AM
Thank you both (:
<33 Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind. "Live your life and risk it alltake your time, no need to hurry have some fun, and never worry ♥" |
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February 5th 2012, 06:09 PM
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it (:
<33 Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind. "Live your life and risk it alltake your time, no need to hurry have some fun, and never worry ♥" |
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