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Glorified Scars - February 3rd 2012, 12:48 AM

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Finger tips running down lines of scars
If I could I'd change them into stars
I'd fill the sky with my twisted, painful stories
Let them shine bright. Behold my glory.

You can't wipe away the pain with a sorry
The memories stuck in your brain like inventory
Just stacking up till it all falls down
Making your stomach feel like its hit the ground
Each burden in your head weighs a thousand pounds
Suddenly all the pain is a massive mound
Maybe you feel like your starting to drown
Your life is all unwound
And your just hoping to hear something profound
But everyone's put you in the background
And no one hears you cry or even make a sound
They're all bound to their own self destruction

There is no real instructions telling you how to deal with the pain,
How to release yourself from the chains,
Or how to dance in the rain
It's knowledge you gain
And if you don't you'll go insane
I learned to release from my veins
It helped drain my emotions, its hard to explain.
But the pleasure gets harder and harder to attain
And these feelings are unbearable to contain
Maybe I can cover them with champagne
But..Is slicing myself open with a razor really humane?
How many more shirts must I throw away cause of bloodstains..

Finger tips running down lines of scars
If I could I'd change them into stars
I'd fill the sky with my twisted, painful stories
Let them shine bright. Behold my glory.

I might add a few more verses and change it around a bit..but so far this is what I got. Let me know what you think

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take some chances, take the fall
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Re: Glorified Scars - February 3rd 2012, 12:52 AM

I love it a lot. Great job. I like the flow of it!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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Re: Glorified Scars - February 3rd 2012, 01:06 AM

I really love how this sounds, and how you repeated the first and last part of it.


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: Glorified Scars - February 3rd 2012, 02:57 AM

Thank you both (:
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Re: Glorified Scars - February 4th 2012, 03:39 AM

this was amazing, i really liked it.
   
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Re: Glorified Scars - February 5th 2012, 06:09 PM

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it (:
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Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind.


"Live your life and risk it all
take some chances, take the fall
take your time, no need to hurry
have some fun, and never worry ♥"
   
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