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Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 03:23 PM

This is another song that I wrote.It is called Re-Live It.Tell me what you think guys.

My life is upside down,
Inside out,the wrong way round,
I've been through it all before
But why must I re-live it?
I just wanna start all over again
But something tells me
That wont be good
Now I just don't know what to do.

I'm stuck here in this madness
Trying to escape the pain
I'd change it in a moment if I could
But I guess I'm going to keep on waiting
Cos if this all goes right
My life can change forever
But why must I re-live it?

If you could be me
You'd know what it's like
If you could be me
You'd know what I'm feeling inside
Cos no words can expain
What it's like to be me

I didn't notice I was still alive
But somehow when there's life there's hope
I'm trying to live for present
Not the future or the past
But I'm not going to hold my breath
While there's still hope

Cos I'm still stuck here in this madness
Trying to escape the pain

I'd change it in a moment if I could
But I guess I'm going to keep on waiting
Cos if this all goes right
My life can change forever
But why must I re-live it?
   
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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 05:05 PM

You really are a good writer. You should learn to sing or play something, you could put your writing to music... Just a thought.


You believe there's somewhere else
Where it's easier than this
And you see outside yourself
And you buy the hole you'll fill
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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 05:17 PM

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You really are a good writer. You should learn to sing or play something, you could put your writing to music... Just a thought.
Thanks again yeah,I've thought about it but I don't think singing is for me to be honest.
   
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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 06:40 PM

I love it. It is really good! Great job!


"There wouldn't be a song called 'You Found Me' had God known'How to Save a Life.'"

"Concern yourself with only your matters." -E.A.W.


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R.I.P. Patch Herrmann January 29, 2000- Decmeber 6, 2012
   
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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 07:24 PM

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I love it. It is really good! Great job!
Thank you
   
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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 07:47 PM

You are very welcome!


"There wouldn't be a song called 'You Found Me' had God known'How to Save a Life.'"

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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 11:28 PM

I really like this I think the words are meaningful and its great, keep up the song writting you have a talent and a way of getting things off your mind! Great work pal
   
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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 4th 2012, 11:30 PM

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I really like this I think the words are meaningful and its great, keep up the song writting you have a talent and a way of getting things off your mind! Great work pal
Thanks Dan I will :P yeah,thats exactly why I do it mate
   
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Re: Song-Re-Live It - February 5th 2012, 09:41 PM

ive said it before, ill say it again.
YOU SIR, HAVE SKILL.
this is my favorite out of them so far keep it up dude
   
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ive said it before, ill say it again.
YOU SIR, HAVE SKILL.
this is my favorite out of them so far keep it up dude
thanks a million Casman and yes I will
   
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