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Song-Re-Live It -
February 4th 2012, 03:23 PM
This is another song that I wrote.It is called Re-Live It.Tell me what you think guys.
 My life is upside down, Inside out,the wrong way round, I've been through it all before But why must I re-live it? I just wanna start all over again But something tells me That wont be good Now I just don't know what to do. I'm stuck here in this madness Trying to escape the pain I'd change it in a moment if I could But I guess I'm going to keep on waiting Cos if this all goes right My life can change forever But why must I re-live it? If you could be me You'd know what it's like If you could be me You'd know what I'm feeling inside Cos no words can expain What it's like to be me I didn't notice I was still alive But somehow when there's life there's hope I'm trying to live for present Not the future or the past But I'm not going to hold my breath While there's still hope Cos I'm still stuck here in this madness Trying to escape the pain I'd change it in a moment if I could But I guess I'm going to keep on waiting Cos if this all goes right My life can change forever But why must I re-live it? |
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Re: Song-Re-Live It -
February 4th 2012, 05:05 PM
You really are a good writer. You should learn to sing or play something, you could put your writing to music... Just a thought.
You believe there's somewhere else
Where it's easier than this And you see outside yourself And you buy the hole you'll fill -Foo Fighters |
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Re: Song-Re-Live It -
February 4th 2012, 05:17 PM
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yeah,I've thought about it but I don't think singing is for me to be honest.
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Re: Song-Re-Live It -
February 4th 2012, 06:40 PM
I love it. It is really good! Great job!
 I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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Re: Song-Re-Live It -
February 4th 2012, 07:47 PM
You are very welcome!
I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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Re: Song-Re-Live It -
February 4th 2012, 11:28 PM
I really like this I think the words are meaningful and its great, keep up the song writting you have a talent and a way of getting things off your mind! Great work pal
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Re: Song-Re-Live It -
February 4th 2012, 11:30 PM
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I will :P yeah,thats exactly why I do it mate
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Re: Song-Re-Live It -
February 5th 2012, 09:41 PM
ive said it before, ill say it again.
YOU SIR, HAVE SKILL. this is my favorite out of them so far keep it up dude |
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February 5th 2012, 10:12 PM
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and yes I will
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