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"Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 5th 2012, 09:28 PM

How could you forget me
when I'm right here?
Even though you are gone
I still keep you in my tears

I sit in a cold room
Prayin' that you will come back
We were so close
but all I saw was your shadow walking away

Why did you leave me stranded here?
Why did you leave me stranded there?
Why dod you leave me all alone?
Everybody knows I've got no place to go.
Why did you leave me?

I recall those three words you said
They're still barely an echo
You've left a hole deep inside me
But it will never go away

Why did you leave me with a broken heart?
Why did you leave me in the dark?
Why did you leave me all alone?
Everybody knows I'm without a home.
Why did you leave me?

I remember when you were in love with me
and you couldn't care about anything else
I try not to remember too much pain
Hoping that I'm not the one to blame

Why did you leave me as a friend?
Why did you leave me in the end?
Why did you leave me all alone?
Everybody knows I've got no place to go.
Why did you leave me?

Forever wasn't enough
Now I'll never find love
When i have trouble sleeping
You save me in my dreams at night

Why did you leave me stranded here?
Why did you leave me stranded there?
Why did you leave me all alone?
Everybody knows I'm without a home.
Why did you leave me?


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012
   
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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 5th 2012, 10:01 PM

This is so beautiful. <3


Sing, the last thing on your mind
The last word on your breath
I'll be the one to keep you
I'll keep you at your best



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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 5th 2012, 11:04 PM

i like it. very powerful. keep writing.
   
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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 5th 2012, 11:27 PM

Thank you both. I love to create power and emotion in my writing. I'm glad I can make it work.


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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 8th 2012, 10:35 PM

I really like this. Great job


And somehow now you're everybody's fool. ~Evanescence
You don't know what it's like to be like me. Welcome to my life. ~Simple Plan
I'm not perfect, but I keep trying. ~Hedley
Maybe we'll turn it around, 'cause it's not too late; it's never too late. ~Three Days Grace

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The best way to get revenge on someone who has hurt you through the years is to smile at them as though you have never cried any tears.
   
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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 10th 2012, 08:54 PM

Thank you so much!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 14th 2012, 11:05 PM

awwie me love it cousin<3


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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 15th 2012, 01:29 AM

Thanks cousin!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 15th 2012, 01:32 AM

I LOVE IT!! I WOULD LOVE TO HEAR MORE FROM YOU!!! <3 ^_^


FROZEN inside, without your TOUCH.

Without your LOVE.

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Re: "Why Did You Leave Me?" - February 15th 2012, 01:38 AM

Thank you, I will write more soon.


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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