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February 5th 2012, 11:37 PM
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So I wrote this poem a few months ago..and I decided to put it on a picture, its kind of hard to read so I'll write it down as well lol.
Bone That's what she likes to see The satisfying feeling of losing it all So you can see that beautiful bone. Its like an addiction Slowly draining away everything she used to be Blackening every part of her brain Till she no longer saw herself in the mirror, But what she needed to lose. Even the slightest gain of weight Brought her down. Disgust would flood through her body. Pure hatred. She wants to see ribs, hips, jaw She wants to lose it all But how much can she really lose Before she falls? Crumbling to the floor in a heap Of skin and bones. <33 Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don’t matter and those who matter don’t mind.  "Live your life and risk it alltake your time, no need to hurry have some fun, and never worry ♥" |
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February 6th 2012, 01:59 AM
Wow it is very powerful and has a lot of meaning. I really like it. Great job!
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February 8th 2012, 07:40 AM
This is great.
You want my honesty? This is simply brilliant. I don't say that to many, in fact, I try not to. But it's hard with this type of piece. Great freaken job. |
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February 8th 2012, 09:09 AM
Wow, that's something excellent! Really meaningful. Wonderful job.
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February 8th 2012, 10:41 AM
This is really wonderful and great! I love this.
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February 8th 2012, 02:38 PM
Thank you guys, really! (:
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February 8th 2012, 11:18 PM
Oh my goodness!!! This poem is the bomb! I love it! It's like you crawled in my head with your hand and pulled out my thoughts and plastered them on paper. I just love it
 keep writing please. I want to read more
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February 9th 2012, 07:17 PM
Lol thank you! (:
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February 10th 2012, 04:32 AM
Wow amazing poem. I can definitely relate! Amazing job!
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February 10th 2012, 11:50 AM
Hey there Sara!
I've got to say, this is a really good. You've got some talent going for you, girl! It's tearingly honest. Keep it up!  ~Through the wind and the rain She stands hard as a stone In a world that she can't rise above But her dreams give her wings And she flies to a place where she's loved. Concrete Angel. If you ever need to talk, I'm here for you! My PM box is always open! (: Make no mistake, every prayer you pray gets answered. Even though, sometimes, the answer, is no. . .  HelpLINK Mentor - 2.4.2011 LiveHelp Operator - 18.6.2011 |
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