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Post Some of My Poems - February 9th 2012, 09:49 PM

These are some poems I've written in the past when I was happy or sad. I just want to share them with you guys and I hope you like them. I'll post 3 on this thread. Note: Most of these I wrote on tumblr so disregard any tumblr references!

1) Testimony for the Guys.
Always see blogs on tumblr about how a guy has fucked a girl over
First of, I feel it’s only right to say, “I’m sorry on behalf of the good guys out there”
Second, I have to say that women are the same way I think
I just think that as guys, we don’t talk about it as much
because….
I don’t know.
Maybe we’re too afraid?
Embarrassed to admit we got hurt?
Well let me just be the first one to throw it out there then
I’ve been hurt by plenty of girls
and I’m not trying to bitch or whine
but it hurts
alot
Especially because
She’ll always feel like you did her wrong…
but there are two sides to every story
I hope I don’t sound like a dick
I’m just a guy who’s hurting
And trying to find out where I fit in to all of this


2) I wonder
I wonder what it’ll be like
When you see the one
You know
The
One
Who’s supposed to shine out of all the others
Make you feel whole
Take you’re breath away
Make you feel like you have some worth
Make you want to give a damn
That one
Will sparks fly?
Will the Earth seem to shake around you?
Or will it simply be the silent killer
The quiet but passionate burning
To want that person so bad
The inconspicuous hurt that sneaks up on the victim with every step they take farther away from you
The yearning just to hear them breath
Just to feel them breath
Just to know they’re breathing
And lastly
I wonder
If long after you’ve fallen in love
Or if you ever do fall in love
Will you still wonder?


3) Only Me
I am not stupid
Maybe not the smartest
Probably not the smartest
But not stupid
I know how I look like to all of you
And I know that I will never sway your opinion
Despite my best efforts
I will never be liked by you
Why? Because I talk different?
Because I dare to be different?
Because I love with a passion you’ve never known?
Or is it simply because I’m not one of you?
Not in your guild of elites
An outsider
Alone
Now that’s a word that I am very familiar with
Sadness
Depression
Hopeless
Exhaustion
All those words have become too comfortable in my soul
But I will continue to wear my plastic mask
My routine smiles and mechanical laughs
And you will never notice
You don’t care
I can’t make you care
But I care about you
All of you
Always


Rewriting these was like reliving all the feelings I had as I still remember why I wrote each one of these. Gahhh so many feelings... anyways here they are.


“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. You are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. But the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. I'll always be with you.”
- Winnie the Pooh


I may not know you, but I love you.

   
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Re: Some of My Poems - February 9th 2012, 10:02 PM

I find your poems very well written. You have a talent there, a good way to express emotion I imagine, too!
   
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Re: Some of My Poems - February 9th 2012, 10:05 PM

Thank you, writing songs or poems is really the only way I can adequately describe how I feel. oh and WELCOME to TH If you need anything or want to talk, feel free to message me.


“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. You are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. But the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. I'll always be with you.”
- Winnie the Pooh


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Re: Some of My Poems - February 9th 2012, 10:09 PM

Thank you very much I really appreciate it
   
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Re: Some of My Poems - February 9th 2012, 10:57 PM

Basel, these are amazing! <3
Don't ever stop writing (:




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Re: Some of My Poems - February 9th 2012, 11:01 PM

Thank you
I'll do my best


“If ever there is tomorrow when we're not together.. there is something you must always remember. You are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think. But the most important thing is, even if we're apart.. I'll always be with you.”
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Re: Some of My Poems - February 10th 2012, 09:43 PM

Wow these are great! Keep writing please!


I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away.
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