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Slow and Sweet -
February 10th 2012, 03:56 AM
This thread has been labeled as triggering, particularly on the subject of self harm, by the original poster or by a Moderator. The contents of this thread might therefore not be suitable for certain sensitive users. Please take this into consideration before continuing to read.
This probably should be labeled as triggering self harm, but I have no idea in hell how to add a "Triggering" label to it.
 This is a short poem I wrote for no reason what so ever. slow and sweet,
cool metal, warm blood. The sensation. a cold joy, pain... The cool grip of that bringer of ruin pain... Oh the joy of it pain... |
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Re: Slow and Sweet -
February 10th 2012, 08:34 PM
Hey there! No worries! I've added the triggering prefix for you! For future reference, you want to click on that little drop-down menu called "Prefix" when you make a thread. You can then choose what to label it as.
 This poem is very well-written. You can really feel the emotion in it. Keep writing!    My DeviantArt [Originally Joined: April 2010 Staff Member Since: June 2010] LGBT Forum Mod Self-Expression Forum Mod Live Help Operator |
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February 10th 2012, 08:58 PM
I agree that this is well written. It is short but I can still feel the emotion.
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February 10th 2012, 09:36 PM
It is great, I love the emotion.
 I got off track I've made mistakes Back slid my way to that place where souls get lost lines get crossed and the pain won't go away. R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 |
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February 11th 2012, 01:28 AM
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