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Who Can Save Her (another song) - February 22nd 2012, 06:42 PM

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Sixteen years old today.
Her only present is pain.
Father goes out drinking.
Mamma's into drugs.
Little girl's all alone.
No reasons to go home.

Where can she go?
Where will she run?
Who can she trust?

Who will come?
Who will save her?
Save her from the world she knows.


Bruises stain her face.
The shame is in her eyes.
Knows death is her fate.
To afraid to cry.
Who will save me?
Ist the question in her mind.

Where can she go?
Where will she run?
Who can she trust?
Who will come?
Who will save her?

Save her from the world she knows.

She's breaking from the inside out.
Screaming someone save me from this hell.
Running out of hope.
She has lost all faith,
of someone reaching out.
She finally whispers goodbye,
and gives up the fight.

Where could she go?
Where would she run?
Who could she trust?
Who would come?
Who would save her?

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Re: Who Can Save Her (another song) - February 23rd 2012, 12:15 AM

This is really good. I kinda got sad when reading it, and that's a good thing. I like the repetition.


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Re: Who Can Save Her (another song) - February 24th 2012, 06:39 PM

Thanks, I wrote this right after my friend and I had a conversation about bad home lives and a bunch of songs were running through my head so I thought I would try one.
   
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