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April 15th 2012, 08:40 PM
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A dark hollow world
It’s not safe for a little girl One who has been scared every night Those times that she knows life isn’t worth the fight The fire still burns outside the door Tears telling her she can’t handle this anymore She’s been suffering in this place But her parents don’t even notice the look on her face All those scars on her arms Remind her of how terrible her life has been so far She has no place to run and no place to hide She can’t move on because there are barriers blocking the other side The thoughts of an end never leave All she can do is disbelieve Help has reached her heart But it dropped her and she fell apart Her mistakes never end because she can’t think straight Others around her won’t communicate Pain doesn’t disappear from her veins Her whole life she has been locked in chains No one believes she is sorry So she goes back to the worst part of her story The horrid events repeat throughout her life She knows her pride will never rise Bullies follow her in her dreams She never knew people would go to that extreme Left in the dark she couldn’t find the light Now all of her faith is out of sight All those friends that left her alone They’re part of the reason that soon we will see her name in stone All she did was give them more chances In return she was only given evil glances Once she messes up There’s nobody to forgive her not even herself All she hears is a bunch of yelling She knows she’ll never be winning She can’t force people to change They all think she is strange She just wants the sun to shine And people that would do anything to keep her alive -I got bored! So I wrote this! 
 R.I.P. Tatyana Sawka June 20, 1998- April 9, 2012 R.I.P. Patch Herrmann January 29 2000- Decmeber 6 2012 Formerly BruceLeeDemarcus |
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Silently falling.
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April 16th 2012, 02:11 AM
Ah, this is amazing. <3
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April 16th 2012, 07:16 PM
Thank you!
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April 17th 2012, 03:35 AM
I really like this! Keep writing!
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April 17th 2012, 06:37 AM
Ahh I REALLY love this!
I turn the music up, I got my records on
I shut the world outside until the lights come on Maybe the streets alight, maybe the trees are gone I feel my heart start beating to my favourite song. |
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April 17th 2012, 08:28 AM
I love this too!
And, I love how you use alot of imagery. I can never do that. :/ I'm not really that creative. :/ But, keep writing! I absolutely love it!
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April 17th 2012, 04:47 PM
I really absolutely loved this. I could see this litte girls feelings as I read the entire poem. Remember dear It gets better. Keep your chin up. <3
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April 17th 2012, 08:09 PM
Thank you all so much. That really does mean a lot!
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