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April 17th 2012, 09:12 AM
Just something I wrote a little while ago. Thoughts?
Flashes in the darkness, the corner of my mind; seems I’m always searching for something I can’t find. Rain on the horizon; sunsets turning black. Following the lightning, you’ve wandered off the track. Snowflakes falling softly, melting on the ground; maybe what I’m searching for simply can’t be found. my love i'm going to the ocean, let it swallow me whole. | this might hurt. | | unite. | |
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April 17th 2012, 09:22 AM
I think it's beautiful, sad, but beautiful.
You are worth it keep-holdin-on.tumblr.com
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April 17th 2012, 10:32 AM
I agree with Cheye. This is so good, Chessmaid. Your poems never cease to amaze me. <3
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April 21st 2012, 05:38 PM
Chess your writing never fails to amaze me. I love it!
I look forward to reading all of your writing. This is beautiful <3  "I would rather have a cup of tea than sex." - Boy George |
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April 21st 2012, 08:39 PM
It is one of those sad, pretty things that brings tears to your eyes! Your work is so amazing Chinese Checkers! <3
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April 22nd 2012, 04:00 AM
I love this! Its really amazing. keep writing! <3
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April 23rd 2012, 12:57 PM
Wow, how did I not notice more people had replied to this?
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April 23rd 2012, 03:31 PM
I really like this. I do a little poetry too, but I'm not too good at it.
But you're really good. Keep writing, this is awesome!
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April 25th 2012, 04:45 AM
Thanks, guys. I love the positive feedback.
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April 26th 2012, 12:28 PM
This piece totally and utterly blew me away. I love the rhythmical structure, which I think adds to the impact of the last line. You write beautifully, Chess.
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April 27th 2012, 12:24 AM
Your writing is fantastic. I love the strength of the feelings I got from this. The imagery of nature is stunningly, brilliantly woven between psychological wonderings which combine with it to create a more symbolic, profound, and complete idea. The harmony of the sentences resonates with a beautiful melody - the whole piece is beautiful, and somewhat sorrowful. Excellently written, Chess.
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April 27th 2012, 10:35 AM
Thank you! You guys are way too sweet. I don't think I've ever received such lovely compliments on my writing.
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