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Re: Please give me constructive criticism on this poem! - March 1st 2013, 05:29 PM
I really, really like this c: it's a little vague but I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing.

I'm perfectly normal; it's the rest of the world that's insane.



"He offered her the world."
"She said she had her own."