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Re: Poem not sure what to call it - March 10th 2013, 03:28 PM
Awesome poem! I agree with the others too, it sounds good as it is. I'd call it "Savior" or maybe "Revive". And you'll never guess what. I was in a singsong mood, so I just sung your poem