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Re: Poem for my English class: Thoughts? - May 14th 2013, 08:52 PM
I won't try to edit it because I don't want to mess anything up with it, but I just wanted to let you know that this is really well written and I bet your teacher will like your writing style.

The sun is always gonna rise up
You need to get up, gotta keep your head up
Look at the people all around you
The way you feel is something everybody goes through