[ieatpeople]

not all poems have to rhyme.. do they? they can be like.. prose.. right? uhh...

Rust

Last night I ran
I ran around the house
While things and shadows chased me

The knife was in the freezer
The razor in the sink
They're all rather dirty

So I grabbed what I could
As it tried to hit
Like they called me from where they were lying

And I snipped it all away
I snipped the skin

But then it wouldn't stop crying

i mean they cant always make sense since people who read them should put sense into them not get sense from them..

and they couldnt always be a whole train of thought? they could just be a thought.. a part of one... right?