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Re: poem yikes - November 2nd 2015, 04:28 AM

I really liked this especially this part:
Quote:
Take me to a place,
where the streets are not marked
where the turtles sing joyous songs
where the mermaids are free to roam
And the goats, they play tag with kittens,
while fireflies dance all night long


Take me to where the stars glow brighter
Not invisible, not profane to distracted city dwellers
and I loved the ending!