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some lyrics dor me songs - November 30th 2009, 07:34 AM

ok so i wrote some lyrics for my band muisc ...want to kow what you guys think ...


my world is dark and you were the light

Beauty unavoidable,
smile that brings light upon a darkened path
on my last breath id call for you
just to hear you laught.
i'd walk to the end of the world
to look into your eyez
becuase you are the only one that
can supress this fire inside.

why do i feel like this!
why cant she see
everytime i look at her
she stares right through me.

i feared this day would come
when i would be alone
for much time i have long for a home
i have searched endlessly for an
answer to my question
what i found to be true
is invisible on is not me
the invisible one is you.

this next one is kinda more brutal..........just cuz i like to write like this.

The butcher

He came in their dreams
which made them run
covered in blood
burnt by the sun.

he stretched out his hand
to fill his void
grinning and laughing
at what he distroyed.

yeah so still some work to be down ...to get the flow of the song better and more lyrics aswell
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