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Re: The Dawn Of Midnight. - May 28th 2010, 10:04 AM

You write really well! That was great.
Good use of imagery and repetition.
Keep writing.

paper is dead without words,
ink idle without a poem,
all the world dead without stories,
without love and disarming beauty.
3.6.14 | 19.8.14
are we to blame for your flawed design?

I'm not crazy, I'm the queen.