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Re: The Dawn Of Midnight. - May 28th 2010, 10:04 AM

You write really well! That was great.
Good use of imagery and repetition.
Keep writing.
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𝒰𝓃𝓉𝒾𝓁 𝒷𝑒𝓃𝑒𝒶𝓉𝒽 𝒶 𝓆𝓊𝒾𝑒𝓉 𝓈𝓀𝓎,
𝒶𝓉𝑜𝓅 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓇𝓊𝒷𝒷𝓁𝑒 𝓌𝑒 𝓌𝒾𝓁𝓁 𝓈𝓉𝒶𝓃𝒹,
𝒶𝓃𝒹 𝒻𝒾𝓃𝒶𝓁𝓁𝓎 𝒹𝑒𝓂𝓎𝓈𝓉𝒾𝒻𝓎
𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓂𝑒𝓈𝓈𝒶𝑔𝑒 𝒾𝓃 𝒻𝒶𝓉𝑒'𝓈 𝓇𝑒𝓅𝓇𝒾𝓂𝒶𝓃𝒹.