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Re: my blog -
August 19th 2011, 03:19 AM
While I can make out the font style, although I'm not a fan of it, I'd prefer something more readable, I agree with VoidZN in that your writing abilities make reading your blog difficult and sometimes cryptic. Your spelling is more or less fine, very few errors but your grammar is virtually non-existent, it's hard to tell where one sentence starts and ends, as well as a somewhat confusing mass of ideas. Work on grammar, punctuation and making each post a bit more coherent. The font is odd, such as lower-case "v" and "w" being the size of "t" and "b". I'd say using a more readable font is a secondary change to improving grammar, punctuation and coherence.
As VoidZN said, don't expect readers because your posts are a bit cryptic and hard to understand.
I can rip you off, and steal all your cash, suckerpunch you in the face, stand back and laugh. Leave you stranded as fast as a heart-attack.
- Danko Jones (I Think Bad Thoughts)
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