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Gotta keep your face up.
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Name: Dez
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Re: Give Me A Chance (Poem) -
December 28th 2012, 04:29 AM
I really like the poem and how you used repetition in it! Great job! I'm sorry to hear about the teacher though. Don't let him get in the way of what you love. 
The sun is always gonna rise up
You need to get up, gotta keep your head up
Look at the people all around you
The way you feel is something everybody goes through
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