December 22nd 2023 05:19 PM |
Butterscotch. |
Re: Reflections and opposites,
Really great job with writing this! Although you and the homeless people have opposite lives, your struggles are still the same. Thanks for sharing!
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January 17th 2023 09:04 PM |
Celyn |
Re: Reflections and opposites,
I love how you have written this as opposites. It's also very thought provoking too!
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October 15th 2022 03:34 AM |
Dawn. |
Re: Reflections and opposites,
I really like this piece.
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October 14th 2022 11:41 PM |
Arabesque- golfing girl. |
Re: Reflections and opposites,
This was lovely and I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for this.
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October 14th 2022 09:57 PM |
Ennui. |
Re: Reflections and opposites,
This is really thought provoking!
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October 14th 2022 09:15 PM |
WhisperingSilence |
Reflections and opposites,
I've a roof over my head,
A place to sleep,
Others are forgotten,
Left for dead,
I've a pillow,
They've a stone slab,
I've a place to sleep,
They've a cardboard box,
I've cupboards of food,
They've begged for every scrap,
My life isn't great
But theirs is worse,
I'll open up my purse,
Pop in a few pennies in their cap,
I'll hope they get somewhere safe,
As I sleep in my bed,
Their on the streets cold and no where to rest their head,
Their forgotten
I am too
We've both a story to tell,
We're both human
Just I have a home
While the streets they roam..
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