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Codependensea - March 3rd 2022, 09:48 PM
Inspired by a piece of artwork and its caption I saw on Tumblr. But still a vent piece.
TW: Obsessive love

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Look at me! Look at me!
I'll be all you want me to be
I'll style my hair, I'll buy new clothes
Show you the new persona I chose
All for you, my dearest love
Infesting like rats, graceful like dove
I'll change myself to get to you
Perhaps I'll change my gender too?
Become a person I am not
So you think I'm cool and nice and hot
I dedicate my life to thee
The only thing that's real to me
I'll be everything you want me to
Or tear myself to nothing for you
It's only with ME I want you to be
I'm all the fishes in the sea.

It's enough to live a live with love until we die
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Re: Codependensea - March 4th 2022, 07:28 AM
I love the way that you have written this.

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Re: Codependensea - March 4th 2022, 07:39 PM
I agree, I like the style and the tone I read the red words in.

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Codependensea - March 13th 2022, 04:22 PM
I absolutely love the title as well! It drew my attention and is a great play on words.

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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Re: Codependensea - March 13th 2022, 05:19 PM
I love the rhymes. Honestly I like this piece very much! It's brilliantly written.

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Re: Codependensea - March 14th 2022, 11:45 AM
I, too, really liked the title and play on words, as well as the comparison to being 'all the fishes in the sea'. This was very well written, thanks for sharing!

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Re: Codependensea - March 16th 2022, 05:48 PM
This was lovely to read and I enjoyed it too. Thank you so much for this.

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