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Three Thousand Feet -
July 11th 2012, 12:25 AM
Standing at three thousand feet
Looking down at my defeat
The winds are screaming in my ear
The waves are calm and seem so near
Distant memories flood my mind
The past has been so unkind
The devils stream run from my eyes
The devils horn straight through my heart
I sit and wonder how they'll act
And ask myself do they really care
Looking down from seashore edge
I see his face along the waves
I think of him and what id say
If i could see him one more day
Id say daddy daddy why'd you leave
I was seven how could you leave
I know you didn't ask for this
A single tumor decides your fate
10 years later im standing here
This is famous din't you hear
My blood red arms spread out like wings
One step closer, ill fall to you
I stood there at three thousand feet
The devil pushed me from hells mouth
Last edited by Henrietta123; July 11th 2012 at 03:29 AM.
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Re: three thousand feet (poem) -
July 13th 2012, 01:00 AM
very well writen. strong, emotional. i like it
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Re: three thousand feet (poem) -
July 17th 2012, 12:44 PM
Wow, this is really good. It’s beautiful and really sad. I like it, very real.
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Re: three thousand feet (poem) -
July 17th 2012, 02:35 PM
I love all of this! The emotion is powerful! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: three thousand feet (poem) -
July 17th 2012, 02:35 PM
This was really good! 
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Re: three thousand feet (poem) -
July 19th 2012, 01:35 PM
I agree with everyone else. This is really emotional and very well written.
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Re: three thousand feet (poem) -
July 20th 2012, 04:12 AM
This is a great poem, thank you for sharing it with us
"My heart is warm with friends I make,
And better friends I'll not be knowing;
Yet there isn't a train I wouldn't take,
No matter where it's going."
- Edna St. Vincent Millay
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Re: three thousand feet (poem) -
July 20th 2012, 05:55 PM
This poem is very good. It made me get a little emotional at the end. Thanks for sharing.
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