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September 4th 2012, 12:51 AM
Go on and tell me goodbye
Like there’s nothing left to hide
Let the rain crawl back inside
Scream on the top of your voice
Give in to yourself on the final choice
I know you’ve been movin’ on
But I’ve noticed you still can’ get rid of what is gone
I’ll say I’m sorry for the last time
But just think this year starts a whole new life
You take a few steps backward
Leading you to nowhere
Can’t we just both grow up and get out of here
I know you’re missing something
Girl that’s why we’re losing everything
Can’t make a tear strip right down your face
Because I’ve forgiven myself for the mistakes that I made
And I wouldn’t change a thing
‘Cause here I am still living today
So go on and tell me that you’ve changed your mind
Like there’s a secret that you have left behind
Let rain fall down on your world tonight
We can make this work
It’ll be alright
I’ll let the sun shine brighter if you take my hand
Because you were the first person I could call a friend
I’d take these chains
And break them so there’s no more pain
Yeah I know life could’ve been so much better
If I didn’t see what happened and make you surrender
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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Living the dream.
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September 5th 2012, 11:48 AM
I really like this, but I love everything you write.  The first stanza is my favourite. Good job!
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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September 6th 2012, 01:46 AM
Aw thanks a bunch!!!!
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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September 6th 2012, 10:09 AM
This is really good, I love your poems Keep up the good work.
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September 6th 2012, 11:44 PM
thank you so much!!!!
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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September 7th 2012, 02:43 PM
As always, I love seeing your work. Wonderfully written as usual, keep up the great work! 
I love my Big Sleepy Bear. I still fill my panties; do YOU? No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist. -Oscar Wilde Buddy since 12/25/11 Self Expressions mod since 4/23/12 Helplink mentor since 5/9/12 . . . . . .Skittlify. I was blessed by your companionship from 12/24/01-6/27/13
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Normality, my friends.
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September 7th 2012, 06:22 PM
I'm quite impressed with this. I really like this part:
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I’ll let the sun shine brighter if you take my hand
Because you were the first person I could call a friend
I’d take these chains
And break them so there’s no more pain
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You seem like a great writer. I'm eager to read more
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September 8th 2012, 02:33 AM
Aw thank you so very much!!!!!
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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September 9th 2012, 06:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Dez
I really like this, but I love everything you write. The first stanza is my favourite. Good job!
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exactly. took the words right out of my keyboard  
formerly snowstorm, GoneBeyondRepair, and Breathless in Love Repose en Paix, Grandad/mom H., Sito, Nay, Mary, Aunt S., Peter, Katie, Lexi, Mrs. Radoye, Mandii, Trevor, Megan, Uncle T., Erika, Aunt R., Braxton, Connie, Adam, Grandpa, Buttons, Aunt Barb, Pi, Grandma ♥ The world will bleed its bloody tale. People will throw their stones. But the one thing you must always remember is: You no longer walk alone. -Blake Bliss
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September 9th 2012, 06:38 PM
lol, thank you soo much!
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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September 9th 2012, 11:55 PM
Great poem, Rachel! And I agree with everyone else
"Just open your eyes and see that life is beautiful..." ~Sixx:A.M.
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September 10th 2012, 01:46 AM
Thanks, that really means a lot!
~I was always scared of everything, even the carousel.~
~Don't worry about me. I'm sort of feeling fine, but by tomorrow, I'll be back on my feet again.~
-Goodnight Tonight
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