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Short poem I wrote for English - September 19th 2012, 08:41 PM

"Beauty"
Life
Sacred Light
To be held
By young child's laughter
To roam the world forever


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Re: Short poem I wrote for English - September 19th 2012, 09:34 PM

Short, but I like it you have a talent for this!
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Re: Short poem I wrote for English - September 19th 2012, 09:43 PM

I totally agree! It is short but it works great with this poem. I loved it.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
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Re: Short poem I wrote for English - September 19th 2012, 10:32 PM

Thanks guys, yeah it had to be short. If it could've been longer, trust me I would've made it! but thanks!


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