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Thank you, God! (lyrical poem) - September 28th 2013, 06:59 AM

Deaths look's at us with evil eye's
Not stopping till all our bodies lye's
On a bed of grave's
And all throughout our day's
We kill each other just to survive.
Dark sneaks behind like a snake leave's a mind
poisoned with sin and dispirited eye's.
And all throughout our day's
We play with black clay
Just to make a mask to hide what's inside.

There's children in the back playing outside
The grass is green and the sun's nearly rise!
The beautiful shade, of god's happy days.
Makes us smile for the rest of our lives!
Oh this wonderful world so filled with awe.
The magic of love defeat's The devil's claw!
And all throughout our day's
We sing and we play
Just to say thank you to God.
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Re: Thank you, God! (lyrical poem) - September 28th 2013, 12:05 PM

This is awesome!


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Thank you, God! (lyrical poem) - September 28th 2013, 01:04 PM

This is written really well, your an awesome writer.


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Re: Thank you, God! (lyrical poem) - September 28th 2013, 05:02 PM

I liked this. Thank you for sharing.
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