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Ignore the grammar and spelling, I'm tired!

The coalescence of evil,
where the good man stands alone.
Although his appearance isn't all it seems
his true integrity isn't shown

Then along she came
persuasion was his key
as she strode into the world
as he awaited she

She soon grew weary
she felt something never felt before,
but for her it was now too late,
she has to face her fate once more.

She clambered away as far she she could
as a plan he began to create
she couldn't escape despite all her tries
the escape that would seal her fate

and on top of her body
no escape from the pain
a faceless figure appears or so she thought
until her mind blacks out again

She will prevail,
herself is the only person she blames,
why, why does she feel so different,
the flashbacks and memories drive her insane

She will arise from the enticing coma,
she will stand tall and fight her fears,
the shadow won't catch up anymore,
even if it takes all her years.



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Re: My poem (no name) - May 15th 2014, 06:08 PM

That was very good. I really liked it.
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Re: My poem (no name) - May 15th 2014, 06:10 PM

Thank you!



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Re: My poem (no name) - May 15th 2014, 10:25 PM

This is quite good!
I'll give you a cookie! (Actually a thousand cookies lol!)
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Re: My poem (no name) - May 16th 2014, 05:52 AM

Why didn't you tell me you could write?! This is amazing.


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Re: My poem (no name) - May 16th 2014, 06:02 AM

This is amazing, Em <3
You talented girl, share more poems soon!


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Re: My poem (no name) - May 16th 2014, 10:54 AM

Thanks Tom, Chess and Kav <3

I don't write them that much



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Re: My poem (no name) - May 16th 2014, 01:20 PM

You have talent!


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: My poem (no name) - May 16th 2014, 01:42 PM

Thank you! <3



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Re: My poem (no name) - May 16th 2014, 02:24 PM

What! Em! Wow, you write so well! It's absolutely beautiful! I love your language! Do share more! <3


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Re: My poem (no name) - May 16th 2014, 08:07 PM

I really loved this! You should share more.


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Re: My poem (no name) - May 17th 2014, 05:41 AM

This was awesome. Definitely share more!
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