TeenHelp
Get Advice Quick Ask Support Forums Today's Posts Chat Room

Get Advice Connect with TeenHelp Resources
HelpLINK Chat and Live Help Facebook     Twitter     Tumblr     Instagram    Safety Zone
   Hotlines
   Alternatives
   Calendar


You are not registered or have not logged in
Hello guest! (Not a guest? Log in above!) As a guest you can submit help requests, create and reply to Forum posts, join our Chat Room and read our range of articles & resources. By registering you will be able to get fully involved in our community and enjoy features such as connect with members worldwide, add friends & send messages, express yourself through a Blog, find others with similar interests in Social Groups, post pictures and links, set up a profile and more! Signing up is free, anonymous and will only take a few moments, so click here to register now!



Self Expression Poems, stories, artwork and similar creations are great ways to let out your thoughts or feelings. Please share your work with us here!

Closed Thread
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread
  (#1 (permalink)) Old
Soda_Voxel Offline
Doing my best
Experienced TeenHelper
******
 
Soda_Voxel's Avatar
 
Name: Please call me Soda.
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Pronouns: She/her
Location: England

Posts: 585
Points: 12,713, Level: 16
Points: 12,713, Level: 16 Points: 12,713, Level: 16 Points: 12,713, Level: 16
Blog Entries: 6
Join Date: December 24th 2020

Angry "Angels and Demons" - May 4th 2021, 03:38 PM

Angels & Demons


An unstoppable force versus an immovable object.
A classic battle as old as time itself.
The sharpest sword against the strongest shield,
The unchanging Demon clashing with the eternally hopeful Angel.
The Demon hates music, but the Angel will never stop singing.
The Angel fears conflict, yet the Demon can't stop starting wars.
No rest, no sleep, even in our dreams the Demon and Angel, always at eachother's throats.
Yet always together.
They cannot seperate, or leave,
but never can they come to an agreement.
The Angel adores society whilst the Demon burns entires cities to the ground.
The Demon loathes life itself whilst the Angel continuously and desperately creates it in front of them.
The ice melts and becomes the ocean, which evaporates into the rain which falls, and freezes again into ice,
over and over and over again.
An endless loop,
and endless battle, never stopping, never faltering.
Always at war, despite their surrender.
The clash of two worlds who wish to preserve one another in harmony but will never be the same, will never have the same ideals.
The two sides of a magnet. Freezing nuclear winters and burning, scorching wildfires.
Angels and Demons
they will never think the same.


p.s: i also posted this on my tumblr. i didn't steal it, i just posted it there first.


It's enough to live a live with love until we die
Autism, Depression, Anxiety
  (#2 (permalink)) Old
Ennui. Offline
Living the dream.

TeenHelp Superstar
**************
 
Ennui.'s Avatar
 
Name: Dez
Age: 27
Gender: ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Pronouns: She/They
Location: Connecticut, USA

Posts: 20,073
Points: 172,770, Level: 59
Points: 172,770, Level: 59 Points: 172,770, Level: 59 Points: 172,770, Level: 59
Blog Entries: 173
Join Date: November 16th 2010

Re: "Angels and Demons" - May 4th 2021, 07:29 PM

Quote:
The ice melts and becomes the ocean, which evaporates into the rain which falls, and freezes again into ice,
over and over and over again.
An endless loop,
and endless battle, never stopping, never faltering.
Always at war, despite their surrender.
The clash of two worlds who wish to preserve one another in harmony
I like this part! It reminded me of a plot in Legend of Korra.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
  (#3 (permalink)) Old
Everglow. Offline
Did you miss me?

Outside, huh?
**********
 
Everglow.'s Avatar
 
Name: Hollie
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Pronouns: She/They
Location: London

Posts: 4,531
Points: 74,726, Level: 39
Points: 74,726, Level: 39 Points: 74,726, Level: 39 Points: 74,726, Level: 39
Blog Entries: 789
Join Date: January 19th 2011

Re: "Angels and Demons" - May 5th 2021, 07:28 PM

I really love your writing. I also really loved the section Dez pointed out, but honestly the whole thing is so well written and I love it.


"Why want another universe if this one has dogs?"

Matt Haig - The Midnight Library

Volunteer Support Officer | Apply to staff
1 user(s) liked this post or found it helpful.
  (#4 (permalink)) Old
Celyn Offline
~One Skittles Minion~

Jeez, get a life!
***********
 
Celyn's Avatar
 
Name: Holly
Gender: Female
Pronouns: She/Her
Location: Wales

Posts: 6,502
Points: 57,786, Level: 34
Points: 57,786, Level: 34 Points: 57,786, Level: 34 Points: 57,786, Level: 34
Blog Entries: 4
Join Date: June 16th 2009

Re: "Angels and Demons" - May 9th 2021, 11:05 AM

This was really good to read and very well written too!


Mentoring and Support Team Leader | Click here to volunteer
1 user(s) liked this post or found it helpful.
  (#5 (permalink)) Old
Dawn. Offline
Laughter. Faith. Hope.

TeenHelp Veteran
*************
 
Dawn.'s Avatar
 
Age: 31

Posts: 13,559
Points: 88,885, Level: 42
Points: 88,885, Level: 42 Points: 88,885, Level: 42 Points: 88,885, Level: 42
Join Date: October 9th 2009

Re: "Angels and Demons" - May 10th 2021, 07:13 AM

Your writing is amazing!


1 user(s) liked this post or found it helpful.
  (#6 (permalink)) Old
Arabesque- golfing girl. Offline
Be Creative. Always Dance❤️

Jeez, get a life!
***********
 
Arabesque- golfing girl.'s Avatar
 
Name: Emmie🦋
Gender: Female
Location: grand jeté pas de deux en pointe❤️

Posts: 5,184
Points: 109,701, Level: 47
Points: 109,701, Level: 47 Points: 109,701, Level: 47 Points: 109,701, Level: 47
Blog Entries: 337
Join Date: March 6th 2017

Re: "Angels and Demons" - May 23rd 2021, 11:06 AM

This was lovely and I enjoyed reading this. Sending you


•Forums Officer
•HelpLINK Moderator
•Community Moderator•
Article Writer
•Resource Editor
•Newsletter Editor
• Social Media Guru.

"Dance is your pulse, your heartbeat,
It’s the rhythm
of your life.

It’s the expression
in time and movement,

in happiness, joy, sadness and envy.
-Jacques d’Ambroise''
1 user(s) liked this post or found it helpful.
Closed Thread

Bookmarks

Tags
angels and demons, poem, poems, poet, poetry, vent, venting, write, writing


Posting Rules
You may post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off


 
User Infomation
Your Avatar

Latest Articles & News
- by Rob
- by Rob

Advertisement



All material copyright ©1998-2024, TeenHelp.
Terms | Legal | Privacy | Conduct | Complaints | Mobile

Powered by vBulletin®.
Copyright ©2000-2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Search engine optimization by vBSEO.
Theme developed in association with vBStyles.