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omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 4th 2014, 08:26 PM

It's such a cool poem guys...it brightened up my mood a teensy bit which is really hard to do


Quote:
Our generation will be known for nothing.
Never will anybody say,
We were the peak of mankind.
That is wrong, the truth is
Our generation was a failure.
Thinking that
We actually succeeded
Is a waste. And we know
Living only for money and power
Is the way to go.
Being loving, respectful, and kind
Is a dumb thing to do.
Forgetting about that time,
Will not be easy, but we will try.
Changing our world for the better
Is something we never did.
Giving up
Was how we handled our problems.
Working hard
Was a joke.
We knew that
People thought we couldn’t come back
That might be true,
Unless we turn things around
(Read from bottom to top now)


source: http://freedominfonet.net/14-year-ol...-21st-century/
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 4th 2014, 09:09 PM

Oh my god, this is awesome!

Such a creative way to do this!
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 4th 2014, 09:09 PM

This really made me think! I loved the ending.
I also thought the article you included about it was really cool! Thanks for sharing.


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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 4th 2014, 09:12 PM

So cool! Thanks for putting the note at the bottom to read it backwards, I would never have noticed that...


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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 4th 2014, 09:21 PM

I loved that. I would have never thought to read from bottom to top.
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 4th 2014, 11:15 PM

I saw this on Tumblr once and found it awesome! Was nice to read it again!


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Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 4th 2014, 11:54 PM

yeah I found it today and I was like must show TH people. Anyways, just to clear things up a little, the note in the parenthesis is part of the poem
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 5th 2014, 12:01 AM

Whoa, that was awesome! It made me smile.


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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 5th 2014, 12:42 AM

I'm glad you guys liked it ^_^
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 10th 2014, 10:54 PM

I've moved this to Self Expression because I think it fits better here.


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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 10th 2014, 11:14 PM

This is really cool. I like how just changing the way it was read changed the entire meaning of the poem. I may try writing a poem like that.


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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 10th 2014, 11:41 PM

I remember seeing this on tumblr and the post said it was written by a 14 year old, which really surprised me. It's an awesome poem and to think someone of that age could write something so great is pretty cool. It seems like it would be really difficult to write too! Obviously whoever wrote it is really talented.


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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 12th 2014, 04:58 PM

I saw this on Twitter and freaked out in my class, its so amazingly written, I love it
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 12th 2014, 09:42 PM

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh!!!!!! This was AMAZING. It's so brilliantly written.

...at least I didn't freak out, right?
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Re: omg such a cool poem I'd like to share - March 14th 2014, 02:26 AM

That poem is awesome, I'm glad it cheered you up
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