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nature poem - April 11th 2014, 01:38 AM

The caterpillar slinks
blending in harmony
whispering secrets
in codes.
The leaf, eager to host
receptive, open
welcoming, warm.

Hold on tight to me,
let us dwell in the layers of grass
Once we’re picked up by humans,
hands examin us closely
our safety unknown
what lies ahead, I cannot tell
let us hold on, for all we have
is each other.
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Re: nature poem - April 11th 2014, 01:43 AM

I love this! The second stanza is my favorite part.


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♥♥♥
Find your light in a new dawn.
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Re: nature poem - April 11th 2014, 01:48 AM

I totally agree with Jenna here! All of this painted a picture though.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: nature poem - April 11th 2014, 02:57 AM

thank you Jenna and Dez
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Re: nature poem - April 11th 2014, 03:26 AM

I like this! Nature is a wonderful thing to write about.
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Re: nature poem - April 11th 2014, 01:02 PM

You've really improved in form, gryff. I'm pleased. Congrats.


I moved back while
my head was turned.

Upside down
closer to the end.

Afraid of the dark
within future times.

I'm drowning there,
my final chase.
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Re: nature poem - April 12th 2014, 01:43 AM

thank you Serena
and Sprint, I'm happy I improved. It's encouraging to hear that, especially from you.
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Re: nature poem - April 12th 2014, 02:47 AM

I like it! And I'm so happy to see you posting your work!


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


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Re: nature poem - April 12th 2014, 04:49 AM

thank you,
and somehow I got the courage
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Re: nature poem - April 13th 2014, 02:11 PM

I love this and I love nature
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