Self Expression Poems, stories, artwork and similar creations are great ways to let out your thoughts or feelings. Please share your work with us here!
 |
|
I don't even like cats
Average Joe
***
Name: Emily
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: England
Posts: 156
Points: 12,776, Level: 16 |
Join Date: March 20th 2012
|
I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 18th 2014, 05:37 PM
This thread has been labeled as triggering by the original poster or by a Moderator. Please take this into consideration before continuing to read.
My days that were gold are now rusted,
The times of awe and wonder have faded,
because there's no reason to fight,
I've lost all sense of light,
and I'm not coming home tonight.
They'll say I'm too young,
life had only just begun,
but the pain bleeds raw within,
says the soul who will never rise again,
and I'm not coming home tonight.
I tried to build the walls around me,
but the problem was always my thoughts,
bouncing around in my head,
begging to be dead,
and I'm not coming home tonight.
I'm searching horizons to no avail,
I'm sailing the seas with no sail,
here I lie, shipwrecked alone,
so to those who don't know,
I'm not coming home tonight.
Don't pretend you care,
or wipe the tear from your eye,
remember what you said,
and now I'm dead,
I'll never come home again.
|
|
|
|
|
Living the dream.
 TeenHelp Superstar
**************
Name: Dez
Age: 27
Gender: ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Pronouns: She/They
Location: Connecticut, USA
Posts: 20,075
Points: 172,797, Level: 59 |
Join Date: November 16th 2010
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 18th 2014, 05:42 PM
This is awesome! I liked the first stanza the best.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
|
|
|
|
|
I don't even like cats
Average Joe
***
Name: Emily
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: England
Posts: 156
Points: 12,776, Level: 16 |
Join Date: March 20th 2012
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 18th 2014, 05:44 PM
Thank you! I literally wrote it in five mins cause I was bored, I'd normally try a bit harder!! 
|
|
|
|
|
Filling My Panties.
I've been here a while
********
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,795
Points: 22,903, Level: 21 |
Join Date: August 2nd 2013
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 18th 2014, 05:57 PM
Wow. I loved this so much! The repetition made it perfect. 
vm-pm
♥♥♥ Find your light in a new dawn.
/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
|
|
|
|
|
I don't even like cats
Average Joe
***
Name: Emily
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: England
Posts: 156
Points: 12,776, Level: 16 |
Join Date: March 20th 2012
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 18th 2014, 06:01 PM
Aww thank you so much! That means so much!!
|
|
|
|
|
Chaotic mind...
Experienced TeenHelper
******
Name: Pathetic person
Age: 27
Gender: Male
Location: Hell
Posts: 571
Join Date: April 15th 2013
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 18th 2014, 06:38 PM
Excellent job on a flawless poem...
Hell, they're better than mine... (Then again, I'm a teller. Not a guy who really reveals all his miseries).
Anyway, good job! 
|
|
|
|
|
I don't even like cats
Average Joe
***
Name: Emily
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: England
Posts: 156
Points: 12,776, Level: 16 |
Join Date: March 20th 2012
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 18th 2014, 06:51 PM
aw thanks tom!!
|
|
|
|
|
Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak ♥
I've been here a while
********
Age: 29
Gender: Female
Posts: 1,964
Points: 35,493, Level: 27 |
Join Date: September 13th 2013
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 19th 2014, 12:51 AM
Em, this is perfect <3
|
|
|
|
|
Guest
Edit avatar
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 19th 2014, 02:00 AM
This is fantastic. I demand more! Mooooooooooar!
|
|
|
|
|
Spite and coffee.
 Jeez, get a life!
***********
Name: Charlie
Pronouns: they/them
Location: on the ladder
Posts: 7,308
Points: 106,723, Level: 46 |
Join Date: September 20th 2009
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 19th 2014, 09:45 AM
You need to stop being so talented ok it's really quite intimidating.
"Love means never having to say you're a werewolf."
|
|
|
|
|
I don't even like cats
Average Joe
***
Name: Emily
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: England
Posts: 156
Points: 12,776, Level: 16 |
Join Date: March 20th 2012
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 19th 2014, 10:19 AM
Aw thank you everyone!
Says you chess!!!<3
|
|
|
|
|
Member
Junior TeenHelper
****
Name: bayleigh
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: behind you
Posts: 203
Join Date: August 12th 2013
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 29th 2014, 06:09 AM
oh my goodness. its beautiful. i love it. so much talent!
Creativity takes courage
-Henri Matisse
PM/VM me if you just need to talk. trust me, i don't mind
|
|
|
|
|
Member
Average Joe
***
Name: Ibrahim aka Ibiii
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Posts: 179
Join Date: January 28th 2013
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 29th 2014, 10:55 AM
Thats superb Emily
|
|
|
|
|
I don't even like cats
Average Joe
***
Name: Emily
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Location: England
Posts: 156
Points: 12,776, Level: 16 |
Join Date: March 20th 2012
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 29th 2014, 10:58 AM
Aw thank you both of you <3
|
|
|
|
|
Member
I can't get enough
*********
Age: 28
Gender: Nonbinary
Location: USA
Posts: 2,255
Points: 26,047, Level: 23 |
Join Date: July 20th 2011
|
Re: I'm not coming home (poem) -
May 29th 2014, 07:42 PM
I really like this!
|
|
|
1 user(s) liked this post or found it helpful.
|
Posting Rules
|
You may post new threads
You may post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
|
|
|
Log in (
Safety Zone
Hotlines
Alternatives
Calendar
