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hello are you there? -
August 3rd 2017, 09:30 AM
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Hello are you there?
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
I'm walking on a tightrope,
Are you there?
Ready and waiting to catch me when I fall?
Can you see me?
Can you hear me?
Hello are you there?
I'm scared and alone,
I need someone,
I'm lost and empty,
Are you there?
Hello are you there?
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August 3rd 2017, 01:49 PM
This was a nice read, I can feel the emotion here. Thank you for sharing.
If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first
The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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August 4th 2017, 01:33 AM
I like how you asked questions in this.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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August 5th 2017, 10:40 PM
I liked the questions you asked. I felt it had a lot of emotion in it. 
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Spite and coffee.
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August 6th 2017, 01:26 AM
I really like the repetition of the questions in this one. Thanks for sharing!
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Jeez, get a life!
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August 6th 2017, 07:16 PM
This was nice. I liked it. Hugs.
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Re: hello are you there? -
August 7th 2017, 06:09 AM
I thought the way this was written was interesting because I liked how you used questions! Thanks for sharing. 
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Re: hello are you there? -
August 8th 2017, 12:20 PM
the repeated lines at different points were a great idea
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Did you miss me?
Outside, huh?
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Re: hello are you there? -
August 13th 2017, 09:27 PM
The emotion in this was really strong. When I read it, it was almost like some of the repetitions were echoes, which seemed to reflect the loneliness which I think was being put across. It's a really well written poem.
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