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Location: The cinema, watching The Death Cure over and over again...
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Join Date: March 3rd 2018
Another random poem... -
March 30th 2018, 11:51 AM
A random poem I just wrote right then... (It may not be very good...)
When others smile, in pain I cry out.
When they may drink, I witness drought.
While others have beds, I sleep on dirt.
And when they heal, I still hurt.
This life is so cruel - why does it have to be me?
I finally find a decent home and then I have to flee.
Of the frequent sound of gunfire, I live in fear.
And it is very rare when, of bullets, the sky is clear.
Diseases here are inevitable - that, I know,
And it’s really hard to travel quickly when we really have to go.
Death will come very soon, I’m sure,
I knew that long before, from a bullet, my flesh tore.
Maybe that is better for me, an end to my life,
I’d much rather that than be sold off as a wife.
Nobody will care about me in ten years - I’m just a little refugee girl,
Wealthy people will keep living, oblivious to the rest of the world.
Feedback please?
Last edited by 48thTree99; March 31st 2018 at 09:06 AM.
Reason: Fixed up a line to make it make more sense...
Re: Another random poem... -
April 1st 2018, 10:38 PM
I like the flow and the rhyming.
Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive