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Unhappy "Unrequited" - April 21st 2021, 02:28 PM

Unrequited
a poem by Soda_Voxel


My stomach churns.
My throat burning from the screaming and weeping,
no longer able to form words.
No amount of music can drown out this painful truth that repeats itself in my head like a broken record.
Cliche it may seem, but I think I truly understand now what people mean when they say
"My heart is broken."
My poor heart feels like it is collapsing on itself,
my chest hollowing out.
It shouldn't kill me,
but then again, how couldn't it?
I long for a future that can never happen,
a feeling that will never be returned.
And I have to live with that.
Live with the fact that you will never love me that way, too.


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Re: "Unrequited" - April 22nd 2021, 01:32 AM

I really love how you started this, and I csn feel the emotion throughout <3


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Re: "Unrequited" - April 22nd 2021, 03:16 PM

I really like what you've written and your grief is very relatable.

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Re: "Unrequited" - April 22nd 2021, 07:58 PM

I always love when you post a poem here because they're so well written, and the emotion comes through really well in this. I love the way you use words which really pack a punch in them. It always makes me feel like I'm there with you. Thank you for sharing.


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Re: "Unrequited" - April 22nd 2021, 08:29 PM

I really like how you wrote this. I particularly like the last few lines as it reminds me of a time in my life as well and you summed up those feelings really well. Hope you are okay


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Re: "Unrequited" - April 28th 2021, 01:55 PM

This was really good I enjoyed reading this


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Re: "Unrequited" - April 29th 2021, 05:35 AM

This is a good piece!


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