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Post Reason - February 7th 2022, 08:58 AM

I tried a different style for this one, inspired by an existing poet. It's different to my normal poetry and it isn't perfect, but I'm pretty proud of it. I hope you like it, too.


They tell you to go and to take it with stride,
to press on and hold out and live life with pride.
They want you to wake up and seize every day,
and not spend your hours wishing life away.

But it can be hard, and degrading, and tough,
you think to yourself, "It just isn't enough,
what purpose is it if it's only for me?"
You want resolve and results and rewards you can see.

With hours of shaming and hating yourself,
Just how can you do this with dark thoughts in wealth?
It's not adequate reason
just to do it for you.

Then do it for them,
if it's all you can do.


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Re: Reason - February 7th 2022, 09:15 AM

I think this is one of my favourites that you've posted. I really love the way this reads and the rhyming in it, and I think the message is really good too.
Thank you for sharing.


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Re: Reason - February 7th 2022, 05:44 PM

I really like this style for you!


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Reason - February 8th 2022, 08:55 AM

I really love your writing.


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Re: Reason - February 8th 2022, 11:26 AM

I think this is the best one you've done so far!
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Re: Reason - March 16th 2022, 05:40 PM

I loved this and I liked how you ended it too. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.


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in happiness, joy, sadness and envy.
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Re: Reason - March 21st 2022, 04:12 PM

You are a very flexible writer in that, though this is a different style to what you normally write, it's still very good! I loved the rhyming scheme and can really relate to this poem with trying to find a reason too. Thanks for sharing


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