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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - January 16th 2012, 04:14 PM

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Writers Block Condition: Dead. WOO.

With her eyes closed, throat sore, and a mouth full of cold rocks
You can see the glow of the joint in her hand, she can't stop
Life's in lock, feels lost, still stuck in this pot
That she's been swimming in since the last time she looked at the clock
   
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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - January 16th 2012, 04:46 PM

Feeling trapped and watched
Almost as though shes inside a fish bowl
She tries to find a way out
None prevails
She slowly fails
She sits on the floor
And screams I can't take this anymore.




the girl who always seemed unbreakble finally
BROKE
the girl who seemed strong
CRUMBLED
the girl who always laughed
CRIED
the girl who never stopped trying finally
GAVE UP

she let her fake smile fade and as she did a tear rolled down her cheek and she whispered

' i can't do this anymore'



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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - January 18th 2012, 04:38 PM

Contradiction, is killing her slowly
Trying to forget she needs a new filling for holy
Feeling lonely, her cieling is folding
Reaching for her soul she's leaping for the trophy
   
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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - January 18th 2012, 09:34 PM

The trophy of death
It defies her
Who she is
What she wants
Where she wants to be
With a bunch of pills
And a strong will
She says her final good-bye
She let out a defeated sigh
And a tear fell from her eye




the girl who always seemed unbreakble finally
BROKE
the girl who seemed strong
CRUMBLED
the girl who always laughed
CRIED
the girl who never stopped trying finally
GAVE UP

she let her fake smile fade and as she did a tear rolled down her cheek and she whispered

' i can't do this anymore'



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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - January 21st 2012, 08:20 PM

what this heartache is all about.
and just when she went to turn out the light
the knight once again returned to fight.
fight for the girl he had loved so
even though her heart he smashed
like ice upon the stone

with rage and fire she spat at him,
"you hurt me and you lied"
and the velvet moon above them wept and wept
the velvet moon had wept


flower
hello my heart where have you been
I missed you when you left
you ran away with that senseless boy
and left me dim and dry
like a faded flower in the mist

Come back my heart. you have a home here
In this place that is my soul
I want to feel like whole again. don't waste your time with him

Have faith my heart. You'll get a second chance
come back to me and you will not be alone
   
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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - January 21st 2012, 10:29 PM

As the moon wept
taking his sword
she made him watch
as across her wrist it went
this is what you've done to me she said
her knight he stood there jaw dropped
with every pill she popped
he saw life slowly slip away
too scared to pray
he watched the night turn into day
the stars have gone
he sings his song
about a girl who's life was oh so wrong




the girl who always seemed unbreakble finally
BROKE
the girl who seemed strong
CRUMBLED
the girl who always laughed
CRIED
the girl who never stopped trying finally
GAVE UP

she let her fake smile fade and as she did a tear rolled down her cheek and she whispered

' i can't do this anymore'



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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - April 15th 2012, 03:05 PM

Until that moment,
Standing tall,
He realises,
He doesn't have to fall.

Still singing,
Standing strong,
It is time
To carry on.


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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - April 23rd 2012, 09:55 AM

He sings the word to his song
'Oh beautiful girl , when did your life go wrong
if I'd have known, I'd have watched you grow , I'd have helped you along the way
Oh beautiful girl, your life went wrong, now here I stand singing this song'
I know I must move on
Give me time and I will
Not yet though, it's too soon .




the girl who always seemed unbreakble finally
BROKE
the girl who seemed strong
CRUMBLED
the girl who always laughed
CRIED
the girl who never stopped trying finally
GAVE UP

she let her fake smile fade and as she did a tear rolled down her cheek and she whispered

' i can't do this anymore'



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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - May 9th 2012, 12:09 AM

the night
sat and crid
one day he pick up
and moved on
to a far off land
where good thing grow
but he was not happy there
he missed his madin so


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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - May 15th 2012, 05:25 PM

So much that he wanted
Nothing more
Than to be in
Her arms again


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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - May 15th 2012, 05:50 PM

Lonely and lost,
if a child, he'd cry
but see the world,
not through blurry eyes.
Behold a new world
sing not anymore,
unless the song you sing
shows beyond the gold shinning doors.


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Re: Continuous Poem - All of ours. Participate! :D - May 21st 2012, 06:16 PM

Will the poor little girl ever find her way back to that happy place?
Back to the place where everything was okay. The place where
everyone was happy, including her. She is faced with an answer.


(So yeah, I realise I'm a bit late but I figured I'd give it a bash anyway)
   
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