(Ah, I can't title. Oh, well.)

As I'm trapped inside this tunnel,
Time and time again,
I feel like a helpless puppet
Watching all my friends

One by one, they're led so gently
Into a state of calm,
And one by one, they disappear
Do they not see something's wrong?

Sucked away into a black hole
Which they cannot escape,
And they can't hear my silent pleas
For them to flee that fate

It started with a pretty, young girl
But of course, to that she was blind,
A rain cloud came out of nowhere
And seized her from behind

Then one dear friend who didn't think
I could see him hiding his tears,
So he's gone too in a deep, dark pit
Of misery, pain and fear

Finally, a friendly rival
In whom I had high hopes,
His growing harem got to his head
He disappeared in a cloud of smoke

So what is next? I almost fear
That one day I will fall
And I will too start to fade away
It can happen to us all

So if your friends ever come to you
And say that something's off,
I beg of you, please listen to them!
Don't be like my friends and scoff

The title should be, "great poem". How about, "please listen" as the title? I feel like it'd fit since it's about listening to warning signs that your friends may show or if they come to you in need. I really like this poem. The lines are creative and I like the message of the poem. Good job on this!

This is stunning! It has so much emotion in it and is very well written.

This is great! Your stanzas flow so nicely. I'm speechless but in a good way.

This is written really nicely! I really liked the third stanza but the whole poem was good.