Triggering: success

[WhisperingSilence]

success is apparantly everything,
or so they say,
its your life and your future,
its everything you are ,
thats what they say,
wake up every day trying to succeed,
only to fail and feel unfullfilled,
get a job,
stop being a slob,
come on succeed,
success is apprantly everything
or so they say
but what happens when
your only success is getting out of bed?
with a heart heavy and full of dread?
as you try to escape your own head?
its an internal battle no body sees,
yet they say you gotta succeed.

[Everglow.]

This is really good. I especially like the rhythm towards the end where you have the three rhyming lines. It also puts a twist on what success is. I hope to read some more soon.

[Ennui.]

I definitely can relate. It's definitely important to remember even just getting out of bed can be a success for some.

[.Brittany.]

I always love reading your work! Keep it up.