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I messed up - July 13th 2017, 01:48 AM

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I messed up again
Close the door
lock me in
I have messed up tonight badly


I messed up again
I tried so hard
lock me in
I am a monster inside

I messed up again
Let the hell I created
Burn me up to ashes
Let my own gallows strangle me

I don't want to open up
I don't want to let you in
I don't want air to breathe

Because...I messed
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Re: I messed up - July 13th 2017, 04:06 AM

I can really feel the emotion through this. Sorry about what's happening right now. PM me whenever you need to talk! <sending love your way>




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Re: I messed up - July 13th 2017, 04:44 PM

I really like how this flows. You can do it!


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Re: I messed up - July 14th 2017, 12:22 AM

I like how each verse starts the same way, to it's repetitive enough to be quite catchy. It's also short and to the point so it delivers the message really well!


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Re: I messed up - July 14th 2017, 11:31 PM

this really captures a specific situation and comes from all that helped lead up to the moment of feeling like that
   
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Re: I messed up - July 16th 2017, 03:18 PM

I agree about the repetition making it catchy! Hope to read more from you soon. <3


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Re: I messed up - July 17th 2017, 05:41 AM

I really liked this and could feel the emotions that were behind this. Hope you will share more soon.


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Re: I messed up - July 25th 2017, 02:11 AM

thank you everyone
   
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