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I messed up - July 13th 2017, 12:48 AM
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I messed up again
Close the door
lock me in
I have messed up tonight badly


I messed up again
I tried so hard
lock me in
I am a monster inside

I messed up again
Let the hell I created
Burn me up to ashes
Let my own gallows strangle me

I don't want to open up
I don't want to let you in
I don't want air to breathe

Because...I messed
up, badly
again

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Re: I messed up - July 13th 2017, 03:06 AM
I can really feel the emotion through this. Sorry about what's happening right now. PM me whenever you need to talk! <sending love your way>
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Re: I messed up - July 13th 2017, 03:44 PM
I really like how this flows. You can do it!

Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: I messed up - July 13th 2017, 11:22 PM
I like how each verse starts the same way, to it's repetitive enough to be quite catchy. It's also short and to the point so it delivers the message really well!

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Re: I messed up - July 14th 2017, 10:31 PM
this really captures a specific situation and comes from all that helped lead up to the moment of feeling like that
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Re: I messed up - July 16th 2017, 02:18 PM
I agree about the repetition making it catchy! Hope to read more from you soon. <3

If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Re: I messed up - July 17th 2017, 04:41 AM
I really liked this and could feel the emotions that were behind this. Hope you will share more soon.
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Re: I messed up - July 25th 2017, 01:11 AM
thank you everyone

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