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1001 ways to die - October 4th 2016, 05:46 PM

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Some people hug and kiss
Some people like to tickle the not-so-ticklish
Some people pray that their loved ones return
Others find comfort in writing a letter
These are the things that keep hope alive
But I just lay in bed and tell myself
The story of 1,001 ways to die
My favorite story, I love to hear
All the awesome ways I can disappear
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Re: 1001 ways to die - October 4th 2016, 07:24 PM

I actually found this thought provoking and wonder if there is any way to extend it into a story or something. Only if you want to of course.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: 1001 ways to die - October 4th 2016, 07:53 PM

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I actually found this thought provoking and wonder if there is any way to extend it into a story or something. Only if you want to of course.

Thank you Dez,
Hmm I can try! Any ideas?

I have this one friend who tells me I'm a better storyteller than poet xD I am not confident in myself though
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Re: 1001 ways to die - October 4th 2016, 11:05 PM

I really like the way this is set up - first introducing what "some people" do and then going into what the narrator is doing, which seems strikingly different. Thanks for sharing, and as always I look forward to seeing your next piece.


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Re: 1001 ways to die - October 5th 2016, 02:57 AM

I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: 1001 ways to die - October 9th 2016, 06:38 AM

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