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Another poem I wrote - December 3rd 2015, 12:41 PM

Choices
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I walked down to the forest
Where I found myself alone
So if I'm tempted into badness
Then no one would ever know

But if I stay strong
And do what I know is right
Then Ill sing a happy song
That makes me shine so bright

I don't want to be pulled into guilt
Or be far too ashamed
By some big mistake
Now I have two choices

I walked down to the forest
Where I found myself alone
Instead of falling in badness
I just said no
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I know that some of you wanted to see more of my poems so here's another one. I was referring to suicide in the poem but it makes it more relatable to not mention that. I mean, there are a lot of people who act differently when they're alone.
I literally wrote this poem when I was in the woods, almost ready to kill myself. But I didn't even try!
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Re: Another poem I wrote - December 3rd 2015, 12:57 PM

I really like this and how you talked about the forest. It's creative and I am glad you kept yourself safe. Was the walk in the forest, did you find it to be relaxing and therapeutic being outside?


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Re: Another poem I wrote - December 3rd 2015, 02:33 PM

Atropos, yes it was relaxing and therapeutic. I just have to make sure not to do something stupid when I'm alone.
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Re: Another poem I wrote - December 4th 2015, 09:33 PM

Yet another well-written poem! I'm glad you didn't do anything dangerous when you took a walk. Stay safe, okay? You can get through these thoughts.
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Re: Another poem I wrote - December 5th 2015, 01:05 AM

I know you can do this! This is a great poem.


Do you ever get a little bit tired of life
Like you're not really happy but you don't wanna die
Like you're hanging by a thread but you gotta survive
'Cause you gotta survive
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Re: Another poem I wrote - December 7th 2015, 04:47 AM

I like this poem, you did a nice job on it. I'm glad you used it as an alternative instead of harming yourself.


If clarity's in death, then why won't this die?
Years of tearing down our banners, you and I
Living for the thrill of hitting you where it hurts
Give me back my girlhood, it was mine first


The axe forgets, but the tree remembers
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Re: Another poem I wrote - December 10th 2015, 05:30 AM

I liked the poem and I'm glad that you were able to keep yourself safe. Hang in there.
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