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spontaneous response poem - August 18th 2016, 01:20 AM

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There's this person who writes poetry and I end up writing a "response" poem it's not really a direct response but it is just something I think of on the spot after reading it, usually using a word or two from to jumpstart my own. This one is mine :P
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I learned a lesson from my foe
how to cherish my pinky toe
how to not pout or pick or peel
Just leave it alone, it'll heal, on it's own
Not to be punched or pinched or potched
It's had enough mishap in its life
It may not be much fun or in the mood to giggle
But it loves to waggle and to wiggle
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Re: spontaneous response poem - August 18th 2016, 01:27 AM

I like this response! It is great when other writers are inspiration.


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Re: spontaneous response poem - August 18th 2016, 01:37 AM

Nice poem May. Hope you're okay.
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Re: spontaneous response poem - August 19th 2016, 02:47 PM

Thank you both of you
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Re: spontaneous response poem - August 20th 2016, 01:57 PM

My spontaneous response to this spontaneous response poem is that you should write more of these. Also, I'm a sucker for alliteration so I think this is great.


Powered by cats, crystals, and intuition.
Roses are red
the candles are lit
do no harm
but take no shit
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my crystal ball tells me you're full of shit.
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Re: spontaneous response poem - August 20th 2016, 06:21 PM

This is clever, I like how you were inspired by another writer, it's a great idea!


I am inimitable, I am an original

If you cannot reach me to fly, teach me to sing
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