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poem - December 15th 2016, 03:37 AM

Such a tender heart,
purring, loving,
I can't imagine my life, without
his presence.
He showed me a new dimension of joy

He feels so soft,
warm like a mug of tea
But his poor paws, are frigid cold.
So are his ears and his runny nose

I hear him yelp in pain
In the language he knows best
Sometimes the most giving are hurting so much
Sometimes the most heart warming, need a warm touch
   
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Re: poem - December 15th 2016, 11:52 AM

I really like this one! It kind of made me feel warm.


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Re: poem - December 15th 2016, 11:00 PM

Aw, this was somehow both really sweet and kind of sad. Thanks for sharing.




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Re: poem - December 16th 2016, 12:58 PM

This is sweet. I like the descriptions of the warmth and cold; you're good at describing things.


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Re: poem - December 16th 2016, 08:24 PM

I really enjoyed reading this one! However, I now want a cup of tea..



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Re: poem - December 17th 2016, 03:25 AM

I agree that this was sweet but also kind of sad! Thank you for sharing.


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Re: poem - December 27th 2016, 04:31 PM

Thank you all of you
   
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Re: poem - January 2nd 2017, 05:18 AM

I got the same feeling that this was both really sweet and kind of sad. The last stanza was my favorite. Write more!
   
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