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some poem - February 7th 2017, 02:05 PM

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It is kinda stupid, idk

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Re: some poem - February 7th 2017, 03:40 PM

This was not stupid at all. I think it was amazing. I could feel the emotion and each thing you described. I love it and I can relate so much. I hope you keep on sharing your work with us.
   
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Re: some poem - February 7th 2017, 06:11 PM

This is good, it's not stupid at all!


   
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Re: some poem - February 8th 2017, 04:55 AM

I thought this was good. Thank you for sharing.


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Re: some poem - February 9th 2017, 05:33 AM

This was definitely not stupid! I absolutely loved it! Keep up the great work



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Re: some poem - February 10th 2017, 11:08 AM

This is definitely not stupid. It's really wonderful you are finding an outlet in creative writing and I hope you continue to do so. It's a helpful form of expression.

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Re: some poem - February 16th 2017, 03:06 PM

thank you all so much!
   
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